from this Flixbus window passing towns
toward Perth I read a woman who was once a girl
standing at the top of her innocent street
looking down its incline toward a life
she knew she would not live
from this passing window a flicker
of a young man steps toward a future
down the slope of a snow-skirted road
to the Circle K on the other side of the highway
maybe for some jerky
maybe for his shift. half a steel roof of snow hangs
over an eave like an awning without a partner
water slides from under a cold covered lake
toward a town with lives
I hope I never live.
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